My poem is about this melon head who wished he was dead. I picked this poem because it was kind of wierd and I was interested. The poem is really short though. By the way the first twelve seconds is just your text here so skip that part.
I think this has potential to be quite good, Will. The intro graphic should be shorter, and then maybe cutting the video sections so it sounds like one poem being read by one person.
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I think this has potential to be quite good, Will. The intro graphic should be shorter, and then maybe cutting the video sections so it sounds like one poem being read by one person.
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